tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7599839745127552149.post7601621932196543901..comments2013-11-14T15:06:05.070-08:00Comments on David Gilmore's Blog: On Opening Hooks & First Sentence RulesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14326224688826179127noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7599839745127552149.post-84950276851191935482013-03-06T03:10:01.877-08:002013-03-06T03:10:01.877-08:00Glad you agree, Devon. And I hope this is helpful ...Glad you agree, Devon. And I hope this is helpful to others who worry about the first sentence. If need be, I'm quite happy to try and dig up other examples from published works as well.<br /><br />If I can pry myself away from reading more of Dean Koontz's Midnight, I should be able to make some good progress on the short story compilation today.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14326224688826179127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7599839745127552149.post-55059098837983247412013-03-05T12:25:14.218-08:002013-03-05T12:25:14.218-08:00'if a reader cannot read beyond the first sent...'if a reader cannot read beyond the first sentence, are they the audience I need to worry about with this particular book?'<br /><br />Holy smokes, my exact thoughts, there, David. Exact thoughts. Lol! And I'm in complete agreement. Great post!Devonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.com